The Portal: Safar Ek Andekhi Duniya ka - Episode 1

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Aaj main meri pehil sci-fi story likhne jaa raha hu yah kahani bhavishe (Future) ki hai saal 2023 ki Jaha rajiv naam ka ek vaigyaanik (scientist) Jo apni lab main dusri duniya (another world) main jane ke raaston (portal) pr kam kr raha hai hai. jiss main uska sath uska dost (Parkash), biwi (akanksha), and beta (Rahul) sath de rahe hai..

Vese dosto main Baata doo ye meri ek Kalpanik kahani hai vese main kissi aur field se belong krta hu aur ye meri paheli aur shayad akhir sci-fi story hu sakti hai yadi aap ko ye kahani pasand aati hai tao main aage aur khushi kro agar likhne ki... 

Agar ismain kch bhi illogical lage aur agar story pansand na aaye tao mere aap sbhi request hai ke aap mujhe apne vichar comment main share kre taki main iss story pr aur kam kr sakoon... aur yadi apko story achih lagti hai tao apne dosto ko bhi yah story share kre taki mujhe aur likhne aur kahani continue krne ki prerana mile. 

tao aaiye  chal te hai Ek Andekhi Duniya main jiska naam hai hai "The Portal: Safar Ek Andekhi ka Duniya".

Kahani ke Mukhe kirdar.

• Dr Rajiv : Age 40 years Profession: Vaigyaanik (scientist)
• Akanksha : Dr Rajiv Patni, Age 38 years, Profession Housewife
• Rahul: Rajiv ka Beta, age 10 years, 
• Parkash: Bachpan ka Dost. Age 40 years, Profession Businessman. 

Kahani Shoro Hoti Hai...

Raat ke waqt doctor apne ghar ke basement main apni research pr kam kr raha hai. wo apne kam main itna khoo gaya ki usse waqt ka pata hi nhi chala. thik 11 bach ke 35 min pr doctor ki patni akanksha aati hai..

Akanksha: Rajiv. ooo Rajiv Sun rahe hu tum?    Rajiveee...

Dr Rajive Jaise akansha ko ansuna kr te hove

Ankansha Gusse  main kaheti hai

Main yaha kb se tumhe awaz de rahi hu aur tum mujhe ignore kr rahe hu rajive..???

Rajiv phir se ansuna krte hove

Akansha: Tume suni de raha hai rajiv???

Dr Rajive : Achanak se chilata hai! 

Are waha oo Yes....Yes.....hu gaya mujh se...

Ankasha: Hairani aur pareshani wale bhav main kaheti hai kya hu gaya rajiv kahe te kyun nhi tum mujhe se???

tbhi Dr Rajiv kahete hai..

Ankansha Meri Saalon ki Mahenat aaj puri hu gai hai.. 

aur khushi se ankasha se lepat jaata hai...

Ankansha ko abhi kch samjh nhi aa raha tha ke Rajiv akhir kahena kya chahata hai....

Ankansha kaheti hai Rajive mujhe kch samjh nhi aa raha hai tumkahena kya chahete hu???

tbhi Dr Rajiv kahete hai..

Meri Saalon ki research aaj puri hoti hovi nazar aa rahi hai ankansha..

Darsal pichle kai Salon se Dr Rajiv apni Lab main portal detector pr kam kr raha tha...

Dr Rajiv ka Maana tha ki Saal ke kch khas dino main kch khas jagahon pr natural portal khoti hai jin se ek jaga se dusri jaga jaya jaa sakta hai. Lekin Jb Dr Rajiv ne apne theory apne sathi doctors ko baatai tao sbhi doctors ne uske ye theory kao reject kr diya.. jise Dr Rajiv ne yeah sari theory apni ghar ke basement main krna start kr di... aur aaj pure 29 years baad usse peheli bar apni theory pr kamiyabi hassil hovi hai..

Iss research ke bare main uski Patni, beta aur bachpan ka dost Parkash hi jante thy.. ke Rajiv abhi bhi apni theory pr kam kr raha hai..

Waqt ke guzarte rajiv ki biwi usko pagal maane lagi thi lekin Rajiv ka dost and uska beta Rahul maante thy ki Rajiv joo kch bhi kr raha hai ek din usmain kamiyab hoga..

Khair Rajiv khushi Khushi apni kamiyabi apne dost Parkash ko phone krne lagta hai...

tbhi yaha shoor sun kr uska beta bhi aajta hai aur Rajiv ki aur ankansha ki baate sun kr kaheta hai..

Rahul: Mummy Mummy kya hua papa kyun chila rahe thy?

Ankansha kaheti hai kch nhi beta

tbhi Dr Rajiv apne dost Prakash ko phone milate hai

samane se awaz aati hai..

Prakasha: Hello??

Dr Rajiv: Kashushi se Hello prakash main Rajiv bool raha hu...

Prakasha: Ha kaho rajiv itni raat gaye call kiya tum ne sb kch thik haina mere dost??

prakasha thoda pareshan hote hove

Dr Rajiv: Ha Prakash mere dost sb kch thik hai.. meri Saalon ki mehanat aaj puri hu gai hai Prakash mere dost...

Prakash khush hote hove kya sch main Rajiv tumne Jannati Darwaz dhund liya...

Darasal Prakash and Rajiv Bachpan ke dost hai wo ek hi school main thy aur sathi college bhi kiya jb college khatam hua tao Parkash ne apne pita ka business sambhal aur wahi Rajiv apni aage ki study krne USA aa gaya aur apni padhai complete ki..

Aaj Dr Rajiv ka Naam Jaane Maane Vaigyaanik (scientist) main Shumar hota hai..

Khair... story pr aate hai..

Jb Rajiv 10 Saal ka tha tb ek anokhi ghatna ghati..

Us wapt Suriya Garhen tha.. Rajiv apne doston ke sath khel raha tha achanak ball jhadiyon main chali gai tbhi Suriya Grahen shoor hoone laga..

Chuki Rajiv Hindu family se tha tao hindus Suriya Garhen ko Ashubh maante hai.. issi waja se Rajiv ke sabh Sathi dar ke bhag gaye siwaye Prakash ke..

Prakash: Darte hove Rajiv ko kahene laga..

bhai Suriya Garhen chalo hu gaya hai chal ghar chalte hai??

meri Mummy kaheti hai suriya Garhen ke waqt bahar nhi nikalna chahiye warna Rakshash utah ke le jate hai...

Rajiv Haste hove uski baataon ka Mazak udate hove kaheta hai..

Aree budhoo tu kitna darta hai mere papa kahete hai rakshas wakashas nhi hote hai ye sb apan wahem hota hai... aur Prakash ko chup krte hove dono ball dhundh ne lag jate hai...

Park ke Samane ek Jungle tha dono dost ball dhonte dhonte bahot aage aa gaye thy...

Achanak Rajiv ke ankhen phati ki phati rahe gai...

jb usne dekha ke vahe logo kissi nayi jaga aa gaye hain.. Jaha sb kch badala sa tha jaise ke usne Asaman main 2 Suraj dekhe.. Vahe dhire dhire aur aage jane laga use waha ka nazar dekh ke aisa lagne lag ke wo Jannat (Suwarg) main aa gaya hai jaise ke andekhe phool pohude, bade bade darakh (tree) usne ek darakh pr ek phal dekh (fruit) jo bikul uski height jitna tha wo usse dekh kr hairan hu gaya.. johi usne use pakadna chaha usse piche se prakash ki awaz aai 

Prakash: Rajiv are ooo rajiv!

Rajiv Prakash ki Awaz sun kr johi picheh mood sb kch phir jaisa ke vesa hu gaya..

Prakash kahene laga ke tum itne samai se kaha thy?

Rajiv hairani se kahene laga main tao yahi tha aur jb wo mood tao dekh sb kch pahele sa tha...

Prakash ne Rajiv se kaha Rajiv tum 1 ghante se gayab thy kaha chale gaye thy tum rajiv hairani se kahene laga main tao yahi tha..

Darasal Rajiv Jiss jaga pr tha waha ka waqt hamari Zamin ke waqt se thoda fast tha matlb rajiv ko lag raha tha ke wo 5 min hove hai wahi prakash ke motabik wo 1 ghante se lapata tha..

dono dost ghar aa gaye rast main chalte chalte rajiv ne wo sb kch baataya Prakash ko joo kch usne dekha prakash ke liye yah sb kch maana mushkil tha lekin Rajiv uska dost tha isliye Praksha ne uska sath diya...

khair dono dost baatien krte krte ghar aa gaye...

Jb Rajiv Ghar pahocha tao sham hu chuki thi uski mummy ne ussee daat te huve pcha Rajiv Subha se kaha thy tum. tb Rajiv ne Sara kissa apni Maa ko sunaya. sunte hee maa hass ne lagi aur uske Kaan khich kr kahene lagi kahani achih thi..

Lekin Rajiv ke Bar bar kahene pr maa ne gusse mai kaha apne kamare jao..

Bechra Rajiv krta bhi kya chup chap apne kamre main aa gaya aur uss jaga ko socha ne laga waha ke darakhat phool and paode aur sochte sochte soo gaya...

Agale din school main Rajiv ne ye kissa apne doston ko sunaya siwaye Prakash ke sbhi dost uska mazak udane lage. lekin Rajiv ko insb se koi fark nhi padh raha tha maano uspr Jonoon tari hogaya hu wo rooz us jangal main aata park main ghumta lekin usse kch nhi dikhta...

Khair aaj pure 30 Saal ho chuke lekin aisa koi ek din nhi bita hu ke usne uss jaga ke bare main nhi sucha hu. Rajiv ne tao us apni ek dairy main bhi puri detail ke sath note kr rakha hai...

aage ki Kahani next episode hogi aaj ke liye itna hi..

Tao dosto Kaisa lagi Aap sbhi ko meri paheli Sci-fi story ka pahela episode "The Portal: Ek Andekhi Duniya" series ka pahele Episode Agale episode main hum sune ge Rajiv ka safar ek andekhi Duniya ka aur Jane ge kaise wo us Jannati darawze ki khojta hai...